Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Words on Wednesday--Hot Haiku

Hey y'all


I wanted to do something fun and I find writing haiku quite enjoyable. And me being me I thought I'd make it a little steamy this time. Feel free to join in---you can either email me your haiku or post in the comments and I'll pull some out and put them in the main body of the post. Hmmmm re-reading that last sentence makes it seem like I've started without ya'll *giggling*


And in case you've not done haiku here's a quick primer-----

Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry. You have three lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Within those 17 syllables the idea is to paint a clear picture designed to arouse a distinct emotion and suggest spiritual insight-------

Saying OMG over and over does not count as 'spiritual insight'hehehe and besides you know how we dislike rules here. So.......


Hot breath on my neck
Words whispered from behind me
Eager to release



Lips brush across lips
Soft slick wet tasting probing
The depth of passion



A quick sharp intake
Filling pushing to the brink
Ready to explode



Warm skin on warm skin
Scintillating sensation
Melting into you



Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Well there's someto get you started ;-)

Smooches and gropes babies!!

15 comments:

BeckEye said...

Hey, are those the lyrics to "Gimme More?"

Heh heh...just kidding. :)
I love haikus too!

Avitable said...

Eeeeeek says the dolphin
Ejaculating in spurts
Salty aftertaste

Taking off my clothes
I proudly display my wares
The children all cry

Boobs are like magic
Hypnotizing and in charge
I'll do anything

Mr. Fabulous said...

Far too excited
Before I get my clothes off
I have shot my wad

Bond said...

nicely done

the108 said...

LOL@ Mr. Fab....

Not tonight my dear
I have a giant headache
and would like to sleep.

Matt-Man said...

WHORE!!!!

Turnbaby said...

Beckeye: LOL--maybe I should send them to her!


Avitable:

Adam drinks it down
He can never get enough
Of that salty stuff

Fabby: LMAO

Turnbaby said...

Bond: Awww sugar--come back and leave me one!!


The108: Excellent!


Matty: That's Satan's whore to you mister!!

TopChamp said...

hot haikus! love it x

Mo said...

scintillating time
almost to the edge of bliss
damn my bat'tries died

Anndi said...

Tease...

He comes forward now
Eyes intense burning my skin
My defenses wane

Oh.. and Bwahahahahahahahaha!!!!! good one Mo!

Travis said...

Breath catches, soft lips
Tease and torture, drawing gasps
Sweet pain, sweet release

katherine. said...

allure then allow
intimate exploration
slowly taking all

Lightning Bug's Butt said...

I've written man haiku. All of them dirty. None of them particularly profound. Mostly just juvenile.

Julie said...

Hmm okay here we go:

Bare breasted I glide
my tongue over his hard nipple
he moans, I grin and sigh

**runs away blushing**