Hey ya'll
The uber geek in me is thrilled I got to use "redux" as I just love that word!!
Anyway I've had a great time reading the haiku contributions both in the comments and in email.
As I told Trav writing haiku is pretty addictive once you give in to it. And it doesn't have to be all serious although it tradionally would be. As you will see below folks had quite the time being a little naughty ;-)
From Avitable
Boobs are like magic
Hypnotizing and in charge
I'll do anything
---Like this is something we didn't know
From Mr. Fabulous
Far too excited
Before I get my clothes off
I have shot my wad
---Poor Mrs. Fab
From The108
Not tonight my dear
I have a giant headache
and would like to sleep
---Oh my--a classic take!
From Mo
scintillating time
almost to the edge of bliss
damn my bat'tries died
---So sad...I'm tearing up....
From Anndi
He comes forward now
Eyes intense burning my skin
My defenses wane
----mmmmm---Yummy
From Trav
Breath catches, soft lips
Tease and torture, drawing gasps
Sweet pain, sweet release
----Oh My sugar mmmmm
From katherine.
allure then allow
intimate exploration
slowly taking all
---oh sugar yes! Lovely.
From Julie
Bare breasted I glide
my tongue over his hard nipple
he moans, I grin and sigh
--- Oh well my MMMMMMMMMM
Still more from Trav
Scent on the pillow
He tensed, aching for her touch
Memory lingered
The uber geek in me is thrilled I got to use "redux" as I just love that word!!
Anyway I've had a great time reading the haiku contributions both in the comments and in email.
As I told Trav writing haiku is pretty addictive once you give in to it. And it doesn't have to be all serious although it tradionally would be. As you will see below folks had quite the time being a little naughty ;-)
From Avitable
Boobs are like magic
Hypnotizing and in charge
I'll do anything
---Like this is something we didn't know
From Mr. Fabulous
Far too excited
Before I get my clothes off
I have shot my wad
---Poor Mrs. Fab
From The108
Not tonight my dear
I have a giant headache
and would like to sleep
---Oh my--a classic take!
From Mo
scintillating time
almost to the edge of bliss
damn my bat'tries died
---So sad...I'm tearing up....
From Anndi
He comes forward now
Eyes intense burning my skin
My defenses wane
----mmmmm---Yummy
From Trav
Breath catches, soft lips
Tease and torture, drawing gasps
Sweet pain, sweet release
----Oh My sugar mmmmm
From katherine.
allure then allow
intimate exploration
slowly taking all
---oh sugar yes! Lovely.
From Julie
Bare breasted I glide
my tongue over his hard nipple
he moans, I grin and sigh
--- Oh well my MMMMMMMMMM
Still more from Trav
Scent on the pillow
He tensed, aching for her touch
Memory lingered
Passionate kisses
Excite and entice, tongues join
And the dance begins
Marvelous tatas
He wants to feel them, but no
She is just sixteen
HEHEHE
Such great fun!!!
There were a couple of really naughty ones I've left off this post but you can check them out in the comments of yesterday's post. If anyone else wants to join in the fun either post your haiku in comments or email me.
Excite and entice, tongues join
And the dance begins
Marvelous tatas
He wants to feel them, but no
She is just sixteen
HEHEHE
Such great fun!!!
There were a couple of really naughty ones I've left off this post but you can check them out in the comments of yesterday's post. If anyone else wants to join in the fun either post your haiku in comments or email me.
I'll leave you with one more
The tentative kiss
Opening gradually
To reveal the soul
Oh hell--just one more--for now anyway;-p
His finger slips in
Hot wet heat enveloping
A touch of heaven
Smooches and gropes and mmmmmmmmmmrubbbbbs babies!!





21 comments:
Wooooooooo!! Good stuff y'all!
after reading thru this post once...go back and skip the Haiku..and just read the progression of Turnbaby's commentary....
Holy shit, your site is extra hot today!
GREAT stuff from everyone. Laughed out loud at Mr. Fab's and Avi's haikus. And salivated at the others. ;-)
That nasty hooker
I had no more condoms left
Now my peepee burns
lol my students did haiku last year on our class blog ... something tells me they'd like your kind better, though
My son and I Haiku all the time, or is that High Five?
Trav: It's great to share our creativity isn't it.
katherine.: it seems to be a particular talent of mine ;-)
Lizza: LOL well sugar some like it hot ;-p
Fabby: LOLOLOL
Coco: Well be sure they don't look at Avi's blog then ;-)
Matty: Look you--where's your haiku contribution?
Good things from your friends...
Are you sure it´s "Haiku" not "Hotku"? It´s pretty hot in here, sweets *LOL*
Love it - I´m sure it´s pretty addictive. I´ll start as soon as the little one´s in bed =)))
NO RUBS!!! HANDS OFF THE PUPPY!!! **Runs away** LOL :P
Bond: *stands hands on hips* Well where is yours my sweet friend??/ Hmmm?
Sanni: OMG YESSSS HOTKU!!! You have coined a term for the new age!! AWESOME!! Cannot wait to see yours sugar *giggling*um WOOOOO
Meribah: *places Chinese paw puzzles and RRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUBBBBBBBBBBBBSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
hehehe
sweet kisses, foreplay
let's take it slow and gentle
ouch! That's the wrong hole!
Kyra; WOOOO and YUM!!
Great - now I need a cold shower.
Thanks y'all. XP
Never tell me how
I should use a banana
My way is better
Look at those haikus
You have some horny readers
Hope they all get laid
:)
It's Friday night and the castle is empty. And I come over here and read THIS???!
Shower, yes, the shower.
Oh my~! LOL @ Kyra's! Wooo!!!
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