Thursday, September 13, 2007

Hot Haiku Redux

Hey ya'll


The uber geek in me is thrilled I got to use "redux" as I just love that word!!

Anyway I've had a great time reading the haiku contributions both in the comments and in email.


As I told Trav writing haiku is pretty addictive once you give in to it. And it doesn't have to be all serious although it tradionally would be. As you will see below folks had quite the time being a little naughty ;-)


From Avitable

Boobs are like magic
Hypnotizing and in charge
I'll do anything

---Like this is something we didn't know


From Mr. Fabulous

Far too excited
Before I get my clothes off
I have shot my wad

---Poor Mrs. Fab


From The108

Not tonight my dear
I have a giant headache
and would like to sleep

---Oh my--a classic take!


From Mo


scintillating time
almost to the edge of bliss
damn my bat'tries died

---So sad...I'm tearing up....

From Anndi


He comes forward now
Eyes intense burning my skin
My defenses wane

----mmmmm---Yummy


From Trav

Breath catches, soft lips
Tease and torture, drawing gasps
Sweet pain, sweet release

----Oh My sugar mmmmm


From katherine.

allure then allow
intimate exploration
slowly taking all

---oh sugar yes! Lovely.


From Julie


Bare breasted I glide
my tongue over his hard nipple
he moans, I grin and sigh


--- Oh well my MMMMMMMMMM

Still more from Trav


Scent on the pillow
He tensed, aching for her touch
Memory lingered
Passionate kisses
Excite and entice, tongues join
And the dance begins


Marvelous tatas
He wants to feel them, but no
She is just sixteen


HEHEHE

Such great fun!!!

There were a couple of really naughty ones I've left off this post but you can check them out in the comments of yesterday's post. If anyone else wants to join in the fun either post your haiku in comments or email me.

I'll leave you with one more


The tentative kiss
Opening gradually
To reveal the soul


Oh hell--just one more--for now anyway;-p

His finger slips in
Hot wet heat enveloping
A touch of heaven





Smooches and gropes and mmmmmmmmmmrubbbbbs babies!!

21 comments:

Travis said...

Wooooooooo!! Good stuff y'all!

katherine. said...

after reading thru this post once...go back and skip the Haiku..and just read the progression of Turnbaby's commentary....

Lizza said...

Holy shit, your site is extra hot today!

GREAT stuff from everyone. Laughed out loud at Mr. Fab's and Avi's haikus. And salivated at the others. ;-)

Mr. Fabulous said...

That nasty hooker
I had no more condoms left
Now my peepee burns

COCO said...

lol my students did haiku last year on our class blog ... something tells me they'd like your kind better, though

Matt-Man said...

My son and I Haiku all the time, or is that High Five?

Turnbaby said...

Trav: It's great to share our creativity isn't it.

katherine.: it seems to be a particular talent of mine ;-)

Turnbaby said...

Lizza: LOL well sugar some like it hot ;-p

Fabby: LOLOLOL

Turnbaby said...

Coco: Well be sure they don't look at Avi's blog then ;-)


Matty: Look you--where's your haiku contribution?

Bond said...

Good things from your friends...

Sanni said...

Are you sure it´s "Haiku" not "Hotku"? It´s pretty hot in here, sweets *LOL*

Love it - I´m sure it´s pretty addictive. I´ll start as soon as the little one´s in bed =)))

Meribah said...

NO RUBS!!! HANDS OFF THE PUPPY!!! **Runs away** LOL :P

Turnbaby said...

Bond: *stands hands on hips* Well where is yours my sweet friend??/ Hmmm?

Sanni: OMG YESSSS HOTKU!!! You have coined a term for the new age!! AWESOME!! Cannot wait to see yours sugar *giggling*um WOOOOO

Turnbaby said...

Meribah: *places Chinese paw puzzles and RRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUBBBBBBBBBBBBSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

hehehe

the108 said...

sweet kisses, foreplay
let's take it slow and gentle
ouch! That's the wrong hole!

Turnbaby said...

Kyra; WOOOO and YUM!!

angell said...

Great - now I need a cold shower.

Thanks y'all. XP

Janna said...

Never tell me how
I should use a banana
My way is better

BeckEye said...

Look at those haikus
You have some horny readers
Hope they all get laid

:)

Mimi Lenox said...

It's Friday night and the castle is empty. And I come over here and read THIS???!

Shower, yes, the shower.

Julie said...

Oh my~! LOL @ Kyra's! Wooo!!!